Hi Alivia, I love how you said " aww man Its the last day i'm gonna miss this place." You have a variety of commas and full stops all in the right places, good job and keep up with this hard work and bundle of petenshal.
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Hi Alivia,
ReplyDeleteI love how you said " aww man Its the last day i'm gonna miss this place." You have a variety of commas and full stops all in the right places, good job and keep up with this hard work and bundle of petenshal.