On the weekend I went and took my dog around the block and we were running so so so fast that I didn't even get the stitch. Before that we went to surf life saving and I was the only girl in my team and we were playing bullrush. Arthur said ladies first, so I ran and I made it. After I went to surf life saving I went to Lila's but she was at motocross so then we biked around to Leo's with my brothers and we bounced on the tramp. Next we went to Cael's and he wasn't there ither, so we went on his tramp and it was really fun. Then we looked after Tilly, Lila's puppy.
Then we had dinner, then we had a little bike ride and went back to Tilly's and she was asleep so then me and mum had a bike ride and we went down to the beach.
Kia ora, I am Naia Erickson
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you added a lot of detail in your writing Alivia.
I learnt that you do Surf Life Saving .
Maybe you could start your sentences with something else other than, always using then.
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Naia